Sometimes it’s just a bench, but then other times it’s a bench where you sit with me
Sometimes it’s just a stone, a wind chime, a picture; other times it’s a fragment of the essence of you
Sometimes it’s just a Sunday, but then other times it’s the day you flew
Paul McGovern
Jan 29, 2012 @ 18:41:05
The wonder you imbue into words is a very special ink. Nobody on this planet can write like you. Nonpareil? the word doesn’t define you. You define the word.
Personal experience, an extraordinary girl in an ordinary world. A poet.
These words are emotional tangents – they are poetry, the truth of language. Soul felt, heart felt, from a poet who feels. The best kind.
Objects and concepts given context, given placement in the personal. You are winged, you know that – it’s beautiful to watch your wings unfold.
Poetry isn’t really the mind making sense of the world. Perfect poetry is your soul interpreting existence as the witness of you.
My words attempt to summarise when really I could spend a day within these words expanding each and every one. But you formed them and that implies construction of semantics as should be : )
Kanjō no sōsaku-sha – maybe that comes close ; )
I’ll leave with some Pearl Jam lyrics that I think may relate. Thank you for sharing.
Sometimes I know
Sometimes I rise
Sometimes I fall
Sometimes I don’t
Sometimes I cringe
Sometimes I live
Sometimes I walk
Sometimes I kneel
Sometimes I speak of nothing at all
Sometimes I reach to myself, dear God
feltsensejunkie
Feb 14, 2012 @ 22:00:38
THANK YOU.
(shouty caps are all I have but that comment was wonderful)
Billie Jo Woods
Jan 30, 2012 @ 22:15:28
“Sometimes it’s just a stone, a wind chime, a picture; other times it’s a fragment of the essence of you”
I love the way this reads and the feeling it evokes when I read it.
feltsensejunkie
Feb 14, 2012 @ 22:01:00
Thank you 🙂
Evelyn
Feb 03, 2012 @ 04:07:42
Im startled by the crystal clear blue water feeling this has…
this is fundamental, basic…a pure joy. like tomato and basil…
feltsensejunkie
Feb 14, 2012 @ 22:01:35
Thank you 🙂 Yes, similar sort of theme. Basics. Absolutely.
Robin Hawke
Feb 07, 2012 @ 01:29:42
Stunning.
feltsensejunkie
Feb 14, 2012 @ 22:02:16
Thank you Robin 🙂