An imminence

it chases through my veins

rising to a flesh of words

a milky rose to hum

this song of now, my skin reveals


2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Paul McGovern
    Aug 09, 2012 @ 07:36:41

    A resolute immediacy, the embrace of present. A pulse travels the arrangement giving it poetic rhythm, humanistic in form. Skin almost a page of the poet, our canvas of now always. The books we become in our be. A quickening in the awareness that words are a skin. “This song of now my skin reveals” – I love this line. Like all you write, uniquely insightful and well formed. Brilliant!


  2. Evelyn
    Aug 11, 2012 @ 02:11:48

    “flesh of words”
    something to grab! awesome…


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