Flower Girl

 

Her strands of fire gold that curl

And toe scuffed satin rose clad press

Named in zephyr white, her flame

An earth bound song for the tireless ochre

Kissed, each step, with blood toned life

Only her and the bloom she wears

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1 Comment (+add yours?)

  1. Paul McGovern
    Apr 11, 2012 @ 16:01:16

    Wonderful vivid subtlety, if duality permits such as a phrase. Beauty woven into every line with delicate majesty and ornate detail. Feelings and colours presented in deft arrangement laced with meaning and threaded with refrain. Instilled with life and the pulse of red that bestows it. Absolutely gorgeous in execution. I adore this line: “Only her and the bloom she wears”

    Stunning x

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