Truth Sweet

Treacle

Dripped the longing

Mirrored curve of silver

Holding to the known reflection

Spoon bound

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  www.cinquainfevah.wordpress.com is a site where I join some wonderful writers in a fever of cinquain, and where this poem was originally posted

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4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. dhutchins
    Feb 29, 2012 @ 15:06:20

    Hi I am new to this site. Thank you for following my blog. I have no idea how to get mine going but am in the process of learning.

    Reply

  2. Paul McGovern
    Feb 29, 2012 @ 20:11:50

    A new form to me but one I find interesting. Like everything you put your hand to, beautiful, exquisite and wonderful. The visual clings as the treacle in the poem, a vivid subtlety in lines ornate. Thank you for sharing.

    Reply

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