Reveal

Spun gold, it falls

As cotton peels

Amber glow

Warming the senses

Tracing porcelain

Discarding the shield

Drawing breath

In slow paced reveal

Carnal gaze

Held with a smile

Graceful poise

For his eyes alone

 

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3 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. andthedawn
    Sep 16, 2011 @ 11:18:31

    Wanted to leave a comment last night but my ‘puter wouldn’t let me.

    I adore this! I can only say this…lucky ‘him’ and his eyes. 🙂 x

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  2. Paul McGovern
    Oct 04, 2011 @ 21:00:52

    I don’t know how, but I managed to not comment on this when I intended to do so…

    A swoon of contentment, the perfect embrace of forms. That sought, found completely – the interchange of of senses.

    “Spun gold, it falls
    As cotton peels
    Amber glow”

    Wondrous colour, the action of gravity. The radiance of a prelude to tranquility.

    “Warming the senses
    Tracing porcelain
    Discarding the shield”

    Trust manifest, delicate contact, adoration in action. An abandonment of reserve, wrapped in the love of another.

    “Drawing breath
    In slow paced reveal
    Carnal gaze
    Held with a smile
    Graceful poise
    For his eyes alone”

    Intimate, sensual, romantic – blissful. Shivers fathom on reading these lines, reach for the core. So tender, so perfect.

    Your pen “rights” words, dipped in the ink of endless ability. Pages salute your approach with awe. Those that read your words, douse their essence in wonder. Brilliant.

    Reply

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