Free Fall

In transient flight they are stilled

Momentary hush on the air that moves them

Fragments of time whispered in their dance

Words unfailing in the constant of the breeze

Oakum bows, held strong, in steadfast listen

Fortunes revealed in time spent palms of auric

Veins pulse in peeled skin, curling to the high

Gravity lays claim as neither friend, nor foe

Tempting serendipity in the fate of their fall

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4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Paul McGovern
    Sep 10, 2011 @ 16:25:04

    The inertia of love… the motion of emotion. A fall.

    The physics references are so well formed, they imbue a rhythm in the words… stilled, moves, held, time, pulse, gravity #sixwords from your words.

    An interchange of connection, intimate discourse and an exploration of adoration.

    “In transient flight they are stilled
    Momentary hush on the air that moves them
    Fragments of time whispered in their dance”

    Time and space the counterbalances of existence, fragmented in moments held and cherished but yet consistent in the embrace of love. Past, present and future – amalgamate – time passes, falling in love.

    “Words unfailing in the constant of the breeze
    Oakum bows, held strong, in steadfast listen
    Fortunes revealed in time spent palms of auric
    Veins pulse in peeled skin, curling to the high”

    Communication, souls speak to one another in such majestic ways. The breathing of what matters most, fate & choice – interwoven fabric adorning the essence of people. Love the needle, guides patterns as skin presses skin.

    “Gravity lays claim as neither friend, nor foe
    Tempting serendipity in the fate of their fall”

    Gravity is intrinsic, evident in time, stapled fast to existence. The push and pull of a force, love is gravity of the soul – the traction of purpose.

    Beautiful.

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    • feltsensejunkie
      Sep 11, 2011 @ 11:24:59

      I adore your interpretation of my words. You always pick up on the undertones with such clarity of understanding. Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts.

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  2. The Poetry Palace for Thursday Rally
    Sep 10, 2011 @ 18:53:16

    abstract words…

    lovely sentiments.

    Reply

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