Soft lines

Edged in scarlet hue

Pulsing with life in stillness

Richness in a centre beat

Seamless curves in velvet

Layers kissed in light

Uncurling to unfold

Touched by night to a close

For day to unfurl

Grace in slumbered ease

Caressed in a feast

A passing flight

Proud in splendour


3 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Paul McGovern
    Aug 07, 2011 @ 14:54:56

    Such exquisitely beautiful words, spoken from the beauty held within. I adore every single word, each expresses admiration which in essence what a rose signifies to me.

    “Soft lines
    Edged in scarlet hue
    Pulsing with life in stillness”

    Such visual tapestry, ornate delicacy and language.



  2. andthedawn
    Aug 07, 2011 @ 14:55:45

    Such graceful elegance and clarity. An apt and worthy ode to a natural beauty both the flower itself and dare I say it, the poet also. X


  3. Ray
    Aug 08, 2011 @ 07:47:28

    Just beautiful, wow. Favourite line? ‘Seamless curves in velvet layers kissed in light…’ Rx


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