Bitter Taste

Bitter taste on bitter tongue

Words that roll with shards of sour

Breath tainted with self inflicted doubt

Twisted perceptions fill pallid cheeks

A tasteless, dissatisfying meal of mutterings

Your soul eaten whole with the stale you carry

Gain is futile in acrid swallows

You choke on your own vaporous self

I turn from you and your self pitying exhalations

You breathe toxicity, I will rise above


2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Paul McGovern
    Jul 02, 2011 @ 14:43:03

    Dark, but I felt every line. Extremely well written, every line follows perfectly from the previous.

    Obviously everyone writes the personal but great writing lends itself to others. I can identify with this, I feel it… If that makes sense.

    Brilliant as always.


  2. andthedawn
    Jul 03, 2011 @ 21:22:54

    So powerful and negative, right up my street, I adored the writing but the subject left my saddened and aggatated. Fantastic stuff, yet again! xxx


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